an interactive poem
Marty,
your bones
is utterly original
both in meaning and in form
I have a personal and powerful experience
as I interact within it
I ponder and ponder
whether the bones never miss
as in never fail to experience
the glint of golden tempests...
or never miss them
as in never grieve that they are gone
I decide it is both
this causes my glass bones to wish
they would never die
and could always see
the glint of golden tempests
(God can you ever write)
I embrace the sun
setting as we speak
outside my window
with newfound love
thank you
Thanks. I really needed this pick-me-up today.
WHAAAATTTTT???? You did the poem on Itch.io??? SO FREAKING COOL!!!!!!!
Thanks! Yeah I made that one in Twine.
We never realize how old we are until we try to explain television snow to someone too young to have experienced it.
And why is the poem not here? I could not read it on those links.
I don’t know. They worked for me. What did your screen look like?
One showed some arrows in a box and the second I cannot remember. Not to worry.
Marty,
your bones
is utterly original
both in meaning and in form
I have a personal and powerful experience
as I interact within it
I ponder and ponder
whether the bones never miss
as in never fail to experience
the glint of golden tempests...
or never miss them
as in never grieve that they are gone
I decide it is both
this causes my glass bones to wish
they would never die
and could always see
the glint of golden tempests
(God can you ever write)
I embrace the sun
setting as we speak
outside my window
with newfound love
thank you
Thanks. I really needed this pick-me-up today.
WHAAAATTTTT???? You did the poem on Itch.io??? SO FREAKING COOL!!!!!!!
Thanks! Yeah I made that one in Twine.
We never realize how old we are until we try to explain television snow to someone too young to have experienced it.
And why is the poem not here? I could not read it on those links.
I don’t know. They worked for me. What did your screen look like?
One showed some arrows in a box and the second I cannot remember. Not to worry.